ENG 123 1.F: Worknets

Today’s Plan:

  • Canvas Issue [5 minutes]
  • Modified Think/Pair/Share: Second Article [20 minutes]
  • Mueller on Worknets [20 minutes]

Think / Pair / Share / Think / Write

Now that you have read a second article, I’d like you to do a quick TPS. Hopefully, folks in your group have read different articles so you can share a range of perspectives.

First, I’ll give you 90 seconds to think about the second article you read and the reflection you wrote. Summarize an important finding/idea/contrast between the the new article and the first article you summarized.

Second, I’ll have you pair with your group mates and share those ideas.

Third, you’ll think with your group mates on how to frame two important questions regarding the issue at hand.

  • Question 1: What is a focused question that these researchers are addressing? (So, for instance, not just a generic “they want to reduce gun violence”–something more concrete and actionable)
  • Question 2: What research do we want to do/read to further understand the problem they are addressing?

Fourth, we’ll do a quick share with the class.

Mueller’s Worknets

Let us pay homage to a classic.

For homework, I want you to dive into Mueller’s article “Mapping the Resourcefulness of Sources: A Worknet Pedagogy.” Remember to print out a copy.

Structurally, Mueller’s article is a typical humanities/pedagogy academic article (an article on teaching). It begins by laying out a problem and surveying previous research–focusing on research that is important for his “worknets” approach. In this case, the problem concerns student use of sources–he nods to The Citation Project— and the previous research focuses on Marilyn Cooper’s work on writing ecologies (that writing is always connected to a network of cultural and social forces, it doesn’t exist in a vacuum, a work is a product of a specific social/cultural/economic/political/material/technological moment. Things circulate through, rustle, feed, the ecology). He also points to a few other theorists that follow or echo Cooper’s work: Geoffrey Sirc, Jeff Rice, Bruno Latour.

After the “Opening” section, the next few sections offer more theoretical support for his idea. That is, in order to teach sources in an “ecological way,” we have to have an idea of what ecology means both in general and as it pertains to writing. He begins by explicating Cooper a bit, then turns to Richard Lanham’ notion of “interfaces” to interrogate how current approach to source use are insufficient. His focus, as the section header suggests, is on prepositions.

Mueller writes:

[…]methodical approaches to source use are not so much lockstep processes of search, retrieval, selection, and integration, but rather routes across and beyond particular problems. Simply, methodical approaches to source use can become restrictive too early in an inquiry process if we understand source consultation and use as following too narrow or monolithic a set of procedures. When approaches to research writing tolerate stagnant or unquestioning operations, source integration risks turning into unchecked ritual–a flat but requisite gesture involving finding and slotting excerpts. In general, this is what I wish to avoid in my teaching of research-based writing. My intention is neither to abandon methodical approaches to source use nor to put too deeply in doubt rationalist sensibilities about the functions of sources in researched writing. Rather, worknets as an alternative framework may provide a complementary approach that supports writing conceived and carried out along “wiggyly paths or irregular courses.”

The remainder of the article articulates the four specific “wiggly paths” that comprise Mueller’s worknets: semantic, bibliographic, affinity-based, and choric.

Homework

I offer this layout to give you an inroad into understanding Mueller’s article. Before next Wednesday’s class, I’d like you to read Mueller’s article and post a 400 word summary to Canvas. The summary should:

  • What is Mueller’s issue with the way research is taught? What is his issue with Lunsford’s approach (since he points to her famous textbook as an example)?
  • Explain what theory grounds Mueller’s approach to worknets–what does he mean by ecology? What’s the deal with prepositions? Why call the four elements of the worknet “wiggly paths”?
  • Put the four elements of the worknet–semantic, bibliographic, affinity-based, and choric–into your own words.
  • Make sure you conclude by stressing how these four methods fix the problem that you/he articulates in the beginning! How is this different from Lunsford?
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ENG 301` 1.R: Questions, Job Ads

Today’s Plan:

  • Review Questions
  • Practice Coding
  • Homework

Review Questions

Let’s start by reviewing your questions.

Generic observations: Shorter paragraphs. Subject Lines.

  • Does this class include both learning writing skills for a job as well as learning about the different jobs available? I am excited to take this class because I feel it is very beneficial for exposing students to life and careers after college. Have you found that the English related job market is more difficult to go into compared to others?
  • My main concern for this class is the amount of time homework may take. I have a busy schedule this semester and there are only so many hours in a day, so roughly how many hours do you think I need to allot to this class per week?
  • In this course, will we be covering anything related to writing creatively as a profession?
  • What advice can you give me for the field I am going into, and what additional opportunities should I look into?
  • You mentioned that the editing/publishing industry is a very New York-based field with terrible pay, but do you think those circumstances will change now that the general population has been introduced to working remotely?
  • I would like to ask why you chose to become a Professor at UNC?
  • Is where you are in life where you anticipated/expected/hoped/planned to be when you were younger?
  • My own question to you would be about your experiences working in the field, though I’m sure we’ll be hearing extensive stories on this throughout the semester. You mentioned working as a professor early on after graduating and having done some research. Have you focused entirely on academia throughout your career?
  • My question for this email is what is your favorite album and why?
    • 1960’s: Hendrix, Ladyland
    • 1970’s: Allman Brothers, Beginnings
    • 1980’s Pixies, Doolittle
    • 1990’s Pearl Jam, Vs. (Alice in Chains, Facelift)
    • 2000’s: Vampire Weekend, Vampire Weekend (close second: Regina Spektor, Far)
    • 2010’s: Vampire Weekend, Modern Vampires of the City
    • 2020’s: Elektric Animals, Channels? Spanish Love Songs, Brave Faces Everyone? Illuminati Hotties, Let Me Do One More?
    • Were you a Halo fan? You mentioned Destiny 2 so I imagine you have played Halo.
    • Practice Coding

      I’ve got a packet and a coding scheme.

      Homework

      Read the B&L article (.pdf in the files section of Canvas) and the discussion post assignment by Monday at midnight (I will be reviewing them before Tuesday’s class).

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ENG 225 1.R: Sicart’s Theory of Ethical Gaming

Today’s Play

  • Sicart on Ethical Gaming (Post-Phenomenology)
  • Review “Moral Dilemmas” Reading
  • Collective Read: Sicart 5-29
  • Homework

Sicart on Ethical Gaming

Before we discuss Sicart’s (2013) “Moral Dilemmas in Computer Games,” I want to offer a summary of Sicart’s research method, which he describes as a “postphenomenological” investigation into a game’s world, rules, and mechanics (BC, 26). Here I’m pulling some material from his book Beyond Choices, and from his article “Digital Games as Ethical Technologies.”

Phenomenology is a philosophical method of reflecting on personal experiences, often referred to as a “science of experience.” It attempts to explore and explain how our brains receive and interpret the world. The “post” in postphenomenological relates to postmodernism/poststructuralism. Modernism sought universal truth (it assumed there was one absolute, certain truth). Structuralism assumed that words had certain meaning, and because words have certain, fixed meanings, then language could be used to convey absolute truth.

Originally, phenomenology assumed that we are experience the world in the same way, that there is one universal “language” of experience or consciousness. It was a Modern project–one that attempted to uncover a (singular) truth. So, postphenomenology is a fancy way of acknowledging that everyone’s reflection on an experience will be slightly different. It rejects the fundamental Modern assumption that there is one universal way of receiving the world (and it rejects it on biological and social grounds). And that there is value in everyone *methodically* reflecting on our experiences to learn about the range/different responses. (If you want a much more complicated and detailed explication, see Sicart 2012). So, long story short, what we need to develop is a method for analyzing games–one that is flexible enough to handle a range of responses and self-reflective enough to try and identify why *I* might have felt differently than *you.*

Often in humanities research writing, we talk about this method as a (critical) lens, a way of seeing, or a heuristic (a set of questions that can be applied to virtually any writing situation). For the next week or so, we will be reading Sicart to develop a method/lens/heuristic for reflecting on games.

Sicart’s discussion of postphenomenology in Beyond Choices and “Digital Ethics in Computer Games” provides two major starting points for constructing this heuristic: a game’s world and a game’s rules/mechanics. A game’s world is composed of its story, characters, and setting. The distinction between a game’s rules and its mechanics is a bit trickier; he writes:

Game rules are the formal structure of the game, the boundaries within which play takes place and is freely accepted by the players. Game mechanics are the actions afforded by the system to the players so that they can interact with the game state and with other players. (BC 26-27).

For our purposes, we need not tease out the distinction between rules and mechanics. We can summarize Sicart into two starting points for phenomenologically reflecting on our own play experiences:

  • How did the game’s story, characters, and world make me feel?
  • How did the game’s mechanics (choices, abilities, control) make me feel?

As we read more Sicart, and think about this more, we will want to develop more “fine” questions–e.g., what specific things should we ask about choices? I hope that you are already thinking about the “Moral Dilemmas” article to develop possible heuristic questions.

Let’s add one more layer of complexity to this reflection: do I believe this is how the game designer wanted me to feel? This, by the way, is what makes this “rhetorical”: rhetoric is the study of how human beings create and respond to communication (its a bunch of other stuff too, but this will do for today). Some people talk about rhetoric as persuasion, but it is more accurate to talk about rhetoric as the ability to imagine how different audiences might receive and respond to a message, and to see how a writer or speaker is trying to influence different audiences. Sicart’s postphenomenological process is a method of reflecting both on designer decisions and whether those decisions worked on us.

Sicart Review

Let’s go back to our reading questions:

  • What *design* features encourage or discourage ethical gameplay? [Follow-up for class on Thursday: What can developers do to intensify ethical gameplay?]
  • What is required from players for gameplay to be ethical? (see page 31)
  • What are wicked problems? What are their distinguishing characteristics? What makes for a “good” (from Sicart’s perspective, perhaps “intense” would be a better term) wicked problem?
  • What is Sicart’s critique of contemporary game design? What problem does he see with a lot of games that claim to be using Meier’s theory of player agency and decisions? (see 33-34).
  • If designers include more authentic wicked problems in their games, then what complaints can they anticipate receiving from players? (see 36-37).

Collective Reading

Let’s take a look at pages 5-29 in Canvas. I’ve got some direct quotations underlined. Let’s figure out which of the questions/ideas above these quotes help us further explain.

Let’s do some work in this Google Document.

Homework for Tuesday

Okay, so three things here:

  • First, Read Sicart 62-77, 91-101, and 104-110. It is quite a bit of reading. It will be hard. My advice: don’t try to understand every word at this point. Skim. Find a part of the reading that you understand and dig deeper there.
  • Second, add a passage from the reading to the relevant section of our collective Google Doc. Add your name as a comment to the passage after you have included it. TRICK: You must add a passage from a section of the reading that hasn’t already been added. And there needs to be an equal amount of passages from each section. So if when you are working on the homework you see a lot of passages from 62-77, then you have to find a relevant and meaningful passage from either 91-101. Etc.
  • Finally, complete the 20 minute paraphrase/writing assignment in Canvas
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ENG 123 1.2: Reviewing Summaries, Forming Teams

Today’s Plan:

  • TPS and Discussion [20 minutes]
  • Team formation [5 minutes]
  • Searching in Summon (and maybe Google Scholar) [15 minutes]
  • Homework [5 minutes]

Reviewing Summaries

Today we are going to start off with Cathy Davidson’s Think-Pair-Share method for generating discussion. Davidson describes:

In Think-Pair-Share, you hand out index cards and pencils (this is not necessary but it somehow sets the mood fast and fast is important in TPS). You set a timer for 90 seconds (really, 90). And you pose a question. For example, if this were a class on “Why Start With Pedagogy?” I would ask everyone to take 90 seconds to jot down three things (there are no right or wrong answers) they do in their classrooms to engage students. When the timer sounds, I then have students work in pairs for another 90 seconds in a very specific, ritualized way. Their objective in this 90 seconds is to, together, come up with one thing to share with the whole group, it can be a synthesis of various comments on both cards, but one agreed upon thing to share. BUT before that each person has to hear the other. One member of the pair reads their three things while the other is silent; then the second person reads to a silent listener. Hearing your own voice in a classroom—and witnessing being heard– is the beginning of taking responsibility for your own learning. It’s not only about meeting someone else’s criteria but setting the bar for yourself. There is also something about the ritual of writing down, then reading to someone else, that allows the introvert to speak up in a way that avoids the panic of being called on and having to speak extemp before a group. It is extremely egalitarian—it structures equality. The final 90 seconds involves going rapidly around the room and having one person in each pair read their contribution.

Here is your question: what is one thing that stood out in your article? Can you frame that thing in terms of a “Beef. It’s What’s for Dinner” meme (as in Noun. It’s what’s XYZ.)?

Team Formation

Ok, let’s see how this works out. To Google Docs!

Searching in Summon, Google Scholar

I will ask everyone to identify an academic, peer-reviewed source mentioned in a Scientific American article. [What is peer review?]. Revisit the article you summarized and look for links to studies, names of researchers, etc.

Now let’s see if we can find that resource in our University’s library.

For instance, let’s say that I was working on Gillam’s Bees article. Scanning through it, I see a quote from Michele Simon, who Gillam describes as “a public health lawyer who specializes in food issues.” So what happens if I try Jeff Pettis?

Once we have found our article in Summons, then we want to add a link to it in our Workspace.

Homework

First, please print a copy of Derek Mueller’s article on Worknets.

Read another article from Scientific American listed in the Workspace. Ideally, every team member should read a *different* article. In Canvas, write a short summary of the article that compares/contrasts/connects/questions the first article you read (put them in conversation somehow–what is different? what does this one add? How can we describe the relationship between them?). There’s a turn-in for this assignment in Canvas.

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ENG 225 1.T: Trolley Problems

Today’s Plan:

  • Course Introduction
  • An Intro to Ethics
  • Let’s Talk Trolley Problem
  • Attendance and Intros
  • Homework: Read Sicart, “Moral Dilemmas in Computer Games” and complete the Canvas Quiz (not really a quiz)
  • Homework: Purchase/Download The Walking Dead

Introduction to Ethics

Today I want to give some sense of what constitutes ethics. I’ll start by attempting to differentiate ethics from morals. Both ethics and morals are a part of what we call practical philosophy–rather than dealing with “what is,” practical philosophy deals with how we should act. In simplest terms, both the study of ethics and morals deal with right and wrong. Generally, morality is thought to deal with personal convictions developed via abstract or religious/spiritual principles. Morals can be stated as laws: “thou shalt not kill.” Ethics are thought to be rules derived from “external” agencies–our secular social/institutional contracts. Ethics are far more fuzzy and ambiguous, and often arise as questions that problematize morals. “Thou shalt kill if a solider in war.” And something can be ethical, but not moral and vice versa. Murder, then, is almost always immoral and usually unethical (except, for say, the soldier example, which we wouldn’t call “murder”). However, adultery is often immoral, but it isn’t necessarily unethical (while it is against our understanding of right/wrong, it isn’t something socially deemed illegal–even legally it is grounds for divorce but not prison).

This is the standard distinction between morals and ethics. I should say that I find this distinction between morality and ethics a bit too simplistic. I think of ethics otherwise. For me, morality is the study of the rules that govern our behavior, our internalization of the rules, what we value and believe. The spiritual-internal vs. secular-external distinction isn’t particularly productive for me. I don’t care if the rules come from state agencies or spiritual institutions. Again, morality is how we develop and internalize the rules: thou shalt not kill. A moral. I am not particularly concerned where the rule comes from or who enforces it.

Ethics, for me, signals how we employ, actualize, our moral values in lived experience. It is how/whether we (choose to) act. If morality is our sense of what should be, ethics is the study of how we actually act. Ethics operates in relation to morality, always in its shadow, and often in the places where morals break down. I think the study of ethics is the most interesting when we encounter a situation in which or moral convictions come into conflict. Again, if we believe that “thou shalt not kill,” then how do we also celebrate the soldier? How do we operate in the face of competing morals?

My understanding of ethics is heavily indebted to the work of philosopher Emmanuel Levinas. Levinas’s work encourages us to recognize our aversion to difference, and the lengths humans will go to eliminate alterity (that which is strange, different, unknown or unknowable to them). He jests that we have an allergy to the strange and different, to the other. We seek to “joyously possess” the world as a certain knowledge. Such possession is akin to mastery–to rule the world without question. To eliminate questions that make us uncomfortable. Rather than deal with the other, we desire the same–we desire to know, label, categorize, understand something. Facing something we do not know, or cannot know, brings out the worst in us. To be ethical, for Levinas, is to learn to inhabit this discomfort, disequilibrium and repress the desire to transform something Other into something familiar, what he calls “the same.” To welcome the other as an other, to let them be different, rather than to convert them into the “same” thing that I already know.

Ethics, for Levinas, is learning to recognize and prioritize others, to put their needs ahead of our own. Ethics becomes extra complicated when we realize that others make different demands on us–and no matter how generous we might want to be, we cannot give everything to everyone. To give to one other often means we have to take away from an other. Justice requires I choose between the competing demands of the other and the neighbor.

More than just an analytical science of how we act, ethics for me marks our ability to handle, to process, the unknown. How do we feel, and respond to our feelings, when we encounter the strange? Do we curl back in repulsion? Express exasperation (*why do they do that? that’s so weird?*). Or do we become self-critical? Do we invite reflection (*why don’t I do that?*).

How/do we welcome the stranger? Something different? Further, what happens when we encounter something we cannot control, when we have to make a decision with no clear right answer, when we face something that resists our mastery?

What does this have to do with the distinction between morality and ethics? I believe that the more we recognize and study ethics (as moments of moral indecision), the more we learn to choose when no one true, certain, “right” answer is evident, available, or even possible, the more ethical–the better people–we will become.

Our first major project, which will cover the next 5 weeks, questions whether games, by constructing *sophisticated* ethical problems, can make more ethical in the Levinasian sense I have just worked out.

The Trolley Problem

Let’s talk about the Trolley Problem, created by Foot and complicated by Thompson. Very simply: the trolley problem is a philosophical thought experiment created in the 1970’s by philosopher Philippa Foot. If you have a laptop or mobile device in front of you, then click the following link.

Let’s play 4 quick choose your own adventure games.

So, if you haven’t guessed by now, here is my theory for what video games have learned is their unique province: they can leverage the emotional unrest, affectation, difficulty, disequilibrium of Trolley Problems. Foot’s trolley problem is meant to explore the moral consistency, or lack thereof, people use to make life or death decisions. Video games can proceduralize this thought experiment, to make it more visceral or “real.” We feel the decision–this kind of feeling is called “affective” or pathetic (deriving from the Greek term for emotion, patheos).

In a book or a film, we are left to watch the trolley driver pull the switch or not. The author decides. The author justifies. Perhaps she does so to secretly stir our outrage, to get us to deconstruct her flawed reasoning. She can spur reflection, contemplation, resistance. But we are always a bystander to the action, distanced from the choice. We are witness.

But not so in a game. I remember my first play through of Dragon Age: Origins. The details are a bit foggy–I remember encountering some elves and some werewolves. The werewolves were created by dark elven magic? And then, like Frankenstein’s monster, abandoned by their creators. At some point a wolf had killed an elf. Maybe it was self-defense? I honestly don’t remember. But I remember, unexpectedly, having to decide which species to exterminate. Only one can survive. Neither is innocent. And there is no heroic path to saving them both (well there is, but you are probably only going to have that option if you have made a series of other decisions, and only about 1 in every 10 player unlocks that “perfect” ending). The game forced me to be responsible. I must pull the lever and determine who gets hit by the train.

I’ve played games since roughly 1984 on my Atari 2600. I’ve murdered hundreds of thousands, if not millions of aliens and demons and terrorists and zombies and horde (“For the Vangaurd” or “For the Alliance!”). I’ve killed all these things from a moral position that authorizes their death. I’ve never been troubled by all this killing. Those aliens threaten our light. Those demons threaten Tristram. Those terrorists threaten democracy. Those zombies would eat me and the few others remaining in Raccoon City. I killed them all without friction. (Save for Silent Hill 3, one of the greatest mindfuck games of all-time unfortunately lost to history–“they look like monsters to you?”).

But Dragon Age interrupted my joyous possession of the world, my righteous action, my moral foundation. It stung me. This was something different. I introduce the Trolley Problem, the lever, the notions of disequilibrium, ethics, and agency as a way of thinking about games. I imagine many of you are already thinking of games that leverage this dynamic. Soon we will work together to generate lists of games–AAA, mobile, indie–that we can play and explore as a class (in addition to my required experience: Walking Dead episode 1).

Attendance and Intros

Syllabus too (stuff about games).

Homework

As I indicated above, our first project investigates how video games incorporate ethical decision-making. Not all games do this well–what we need is some theoretical material that gives us a lens for viewing and analyzing games.

We’ll be using the lens constructed by scholar Miguel Sicart, first reading one of his essays and then chapters from his book Beyond Choices. As you read Sicart, keep asking yourself: how does the terms, distinctions, ideas he articulates help me answer these questions:

  • What should/shouldn’t game designers do to make effective ethical dilemmas in their games?
  • What should/shouldn’t players do to have more powerful ethical experiences while playing games?

To get us started, I want to read Sicart’s 2013 article “Moral Dilemmas in Computer Games” (you will find this in the Files section of Canvas). I’m not sure how much experience you have reading academic articles, so I’ve designed a Canvas “Quiz” to help structure your reading. Academic articles often have dense, disciplinary-laden prose; given that these articles are written for experts in the field, they do not always define key terms. Further, academic articles often have to acknowledge key debates even if that isn’t the purpose of the article (for instance, you’ll notice Sicart spends a lot of time reviewing definitions of “game play” early in the article–although I do think that section contains some useful and important information).

I expect reading the article and answering the questions will take you somewhere between an hour to an hour and a 1/2.

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ENG 301 1.T: Welcome. Let’s Talk about Jobs

Today’s Plan:

  • Syllabus
  • Ross 1240 Computer Lab
  • Project One Overview
  • Email Assignment
  • Brumberger and Lauer Assignment

Syllabus Review

Yeah, sure, starting with the syllabus is cliche. But this course probably works a bit differently than others you’ve taken for a couple of reasons. First, because I use labor-based grading. Second, because this course is designed less as a vehicle to teach you something, and more as a vehicle for you to develop a skill.

Ross 1240 Computer Lab

Starting next week, we’ll be meeting every Thursday in the Ross 1240 computer lab. Tuesday’s we’ll continue to meet here in CAND 2260.

Icebreaker

Let’s try a thing.

Brumberger and Lauer on Jobs

Our first project is rooted Eva Brumberger and Claire Lauer’s article “The Evolution of Technical Communication: An Analysis of Industry Job Postings.” I developed this project in conjunction with research I conducted as I was developing professional writing courses for UNC’s Writing minor. I was charged with developing 3 courses that would help both Writing minors and English majors be better prepared for the job market. This charge led me to research job advertisements for English majors, and Brumberger and Lauer (2015) stands as the most recent and comprehensive study I found.

However, their article focuses on “technical communication.” This designation can have many meanings–sometimes it is merely a synonym for professional writing. But not in their case–they use it (as do I) in the more precise sense of developing documentation (instruction manuals), product testing (usability reports), and working with scientific experts to communicate scientific/technical knowledge. Our department doesn’t have someone with those specializations–so as much as I appreciate their research, I wanted something a bit more relevant to a smaller department. Their research speaks more to folks at large research institutions with Professional and Technical Writing major, more specialized faculty, and software licenses such as MadCap Flare or Adobe RoboHelp. We are a much smaller department with 5 tenure-track faculty (and none of us, I think, would claim Professional or Technical writing as a core specialization–we have experts in Rhetorical Theory, Public Rhetorics, Cultural Rhetorics, Compositionists, etc). So the question that drove my own research, which you will learn to recreate, is: what skills, technologies, characteristics can UNC focus on to maximize your preparation for today’s job market?

In answering that question, I’ve turned my attention to Professional Writing jobs outside of technical writing. During my research, I came across a specialized job listing site–mediabistro.com. From their “About Us” page:

Mediabistro is the premier media job listings site and career destination for savvy media professionals. Whether you’re searching for new job opportunities, striving to advance your career, or looking to learn new skills and develop valuable expertise, we are here to strengthen and support your professional journey. We have the tools and resources to help you navigate your own path and find career happiness.

In addition to job postings, mediabistro.com offers resume services and courses on professionalization and personal brand building. Rather than turning to a more popular site like monster.com, I used mediabistro.com because it focuses specifically on jobs involving writing and communication.

I spent the month of June 2018 scanning every job ad posted to mediabistro.com. I filtered out jobs that:

  • Called for experience in television production (especially those that required years of on-air experience)
  • Called for extensive experience as a field journalist (although I retained jobs open to those without journalistic experience; a few jobs were looking for bloggers or content contributers)
  • Required degrees in finance or accounting
  • Required extensive experience with Google Ads and/or other Customer Relationship Management (CRM) softwares (Salesforce was particularly popular)
  • Required applicants bring a client log with them
  • Required management or hiring experience (the term management is quite slippery in adverts; sometimes it means “manage a team” and clearly indicates the need for leadership experience. Sometimes it means “manage our twitter account” and isn’t, per se, a leadership position)
  • Required backend coding skills
  • Required extensive graphic design portfolios (I did retain entry level graphic design jobs)
  • Required 5 or more years of experience
  • Telemarketing jobs, part-time jobs, or unpaid internships

After filtering out these jobs, I was left with a corpus of 375 jobs.

Over the next two weeks, you will “code” 20 jobs from this corpus. We will talk about qualitative coding in class on Wednesday. In addition to familiarizing you with the job market, and the tech, skills, and characteristics for which employers seek, you will also learn a staple Professional writing/ qualitative research method: corpus coding (and a few methods that go with it, such as norming a coding scheme and ensuring the reliability and validity of data).

Here are the stages / parts of the Job Analysis Project (which we will be working on for approximately the next month).

Job Corpus. This is the collection of job ads (from June 2018) from which you will choose 20. Then you will code those job ads.

Job Coding Scheme. Here is a link to the coding scheme. I have slightly modified the scheme used by Brumberger and Lauer. After we read Brumberger and Lauer, I spend two classes coding ads a class (norming sessions). This familiarizes them with coding and qualitative research methods. When there is disagreement on a code, we take a class vote.

Collective Job Code Spreadsheet. Students highlight text in the google doc job ads and insert their codes as comments so that other students can review them. The more students that input codes, the better! This creates the data they need for their report. So, after students code a job ad (inserting comments in the Google Doc), they should insert a link to that document (from the corpus) into the spreadsheet (the job title) and put their codes into the spreadsheet too. (I know this sounds complicated, but I can probably show you this in 3 minutes).

Personal Research Data Spreadsheet. Students make their own, personal copy of that file. They then select the jobs from the spreadsheet that they want to use in their report and make another spreadsheet that they can use to produce graphs. I do this in Google Sheets, you could also probably do it in Excel (Sheets is just more convenient to share and easier, IMO, to use). If you need help turning tabular data into a graph, I can show you quickly (it literally just takes a right-click, then playing around with some menu features for labeling axis and formatting).

Job Report Rubric. Because professional writing is so different than academic writing, I spend a lot of time familiarizing y’all with the rubric. We do this by assessing papers as a class and comparing our evaluations. Below are some sample papers; we will use the rubric to score some sample reports before we finally draft, share, and revise the final reports. Trust me, you can do this.

So, that’s a lot of stuff–but like I said, that will comprise nearly the first month of class and I’ll be here to walk you through every step.

Let’s try coding a job advertisement or two.

Homework For Thursday / Tuesday

For your first assignment, I would like you to send me an introductory email. Your email should be a professional, yet friendly, introductory business email. You should probably Google some guidelines for how to write that email.

Pro-tip: when writing an email to a faculty member, it is helpful to consult this chart [especially if you don’t know how faculty rank works / you don’t know a lot about who is teaching your class].

DO NOT USE CANVAS TO SEND ME THIS EMAIL. I cannot reliably respond to emails sent via Canvas, nor can I include them in emails to our community partners. So, part of this exercise is asking you to send me an email from your preferred email address, one that you check regularly. It is okay to use your unco email for this, if that is the one you prefer. But please cc your other, non-unco email into the message so that I have access to both.

My email address is marc.santos@unco.edu.

Your email should do a few things:

  • introduces yourself (and your academic/professional trajectory, major? minor? what year? future plans?)
  • explains your interest in the course (what are you hoping to learn? why are you here?)
  • details any professional or creative writing experience you have
  • details any social media or graphic design experience you have (including software proficiencies). Personal social media experience counts, too
  • asks me a question (about the class, about myself, about the job market, the writing minor, or about life, liberty, and/or the pursuit of happiness)

Also note the Brumberger and Lauer, “The Evolution of Technical Communication: An Analysis of Industry Job Postings” assignment in Canvas. The Canvas assignment has details on the reading response post (you can find the Brumberger and Lauer reading in the files section of Canvas). I will talk a bit more about the B&L reading and your required discussion post in class on Thursday–the reading and discussion post are due prior to next Tuesday’s class.

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ENG 123 1.M: First Day

Today’s Plan:

  • Syllabus & Intro [15 minutes]
  • Article Overview 25 minutes]
  • Homework [5 minutes]
  • Take a Walk [10 minutes]

Syllabus

Hi I’m Dr. Marc C. Santos. You may call me Marc, Santos, Dr. Santos, or Professor Santos. Do not call me Mr. Santos.

Here’s a helpful infographic.

Okay, now let’s read the syllabus. Let’s read the syllabus.
Things to highlight:

  • Teaching research before argument
  • Labor-based grading and Canvas

Let’s talk methodology.

Choose Your Own Adventure

Alright, here’s a link to our workspace. I’d like to take 8 minutes and have you read one of the articles on the list. After which, I’ll give you a few minutes to plan a response to the following three prompts:

  • I read…
  • It was about…
  • One interesting, surprising, questionable thing was…

Quick Take: How to Read an (Academic) Article

When I assign a reading, I expect you to:

  1. Print out a copy of the article. Don’t try to read something on which you will write on screen
  2. As you read, have a pen at the ready. Don’t use a highlighter. Underline, mark the margin, or place a question mark as you go
  3. Every time you underline or mark the margin, write a comment at the top of the page. Studies show that writing things down helps us remember them. It also helps us start inventing the material we will need to write a summary or comparison. Don’t read passively, but actively. Don’t consume, engage.

Homework

Read another article from the workspace linked above for Wednesday’s class. Note: you can chose an article from a different topic if you want. No one is locked into a topic after one class.

Write a 200 word summary of the article. The summary should:

  • Identify the thesis of the article
  • Explain the methods the author used to support her claims and/or explain important methods used by others who the writer cites in support of her claims
  • Identify a debate, controversy, point of contention in the article
  • Note use the words “thesis,” “argument,” “findings,” or “method(s)”

Note that we will meet in Ross Hall 1240 computer lab on Wednesday.

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ENG 301 16.R: Jeff Buckley Time

Today’s Plan:

  • Expected Grades: Reflection on Labor-Based Grading
  • Constructing a Linkedin Profile
  • Developing a Web/Portfolio
  • Final Resume and Cover Letters

Reflection on Labor-Based Grading

This semester, I have been participating in a Teaching for Inclusion and Equity program and have submitted an article on anti-racist, labor-based assessment for publication. This class was my second attempt at a completely labor-based system, and I have mixed feelings regarding the results. On the one hand, I should say that the quality of the job reports and the community engagement materials were both quite high. (You would know if they weren’t, since I would have re-written whatever you turned in and given you a C for making me do that).

My central argument for labor-based grading is to create an environment that is explicitly less stressful. I told you on the first day, when I introduced it, that if you just hand everything in, and it looks like you tried, then you would earn a B on the course, and I laid out the criteria for doing extra work and earning an A. The “extra” experiences are meant to be ones that almost act as mentoring and professionalization activities–what some might identify as the “hidden curriculum” of a university. Often the academic success of white/encultured/affluent students over that of non-white/first-generation/less-fortunate students concerns awareness of and willingness to use these resources.

But, to my surprise, very few people took advantage of these additional opportunities. So, um, why?

Let me share a reflection I wrote for my TIE program yesterday and we can talk.

Building a Linkedin Profile

Let’s just say that this video by Professor Heather Austin provides perspective.

  • Basics: Get a Headshot
  • Slogan: Max of 300 words
  • About: Split into Summary (Who you are, who you help, how you help them) and the Expertise (block of resume-style skills). Keep paragraphs short.
  • Skills: Pick the “big” three. Then a handful more.
  • Experience: Be descriptive

Resources:

Find me on Linkedin: Marc C. Santos (www.linkedin.com/in/marc-c-santos-967a8a17)

Developing a Web Portfolio

Final Job Materials

I will be reviewing cover letter drafts tomorrow morning. After that, I will open up a Canvas assignment for revised materials (resumes and cover letters) due next Friday.

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ENG 651 Week 15: Resumes, Cover Letters, Linkedin

Today’s Plan:

  • Grades
  • Next Week’s Class
  • Peer Review Resumes (?)
  • Drafting Cover Letters
  • Building a Linkedin Profile

Grades and Next Week’s Class

I have updated the gradebook to reflect the assignment values listed in the syllabus. If you would like to revise any assignments between now and when grades are due, let me know.

ABO Book

Let’s start off with some basic advice. Writer’s checklist. Focused paragraphs.

But let’s talk follow-up (FlexJobs). But first, a scene.

A few other resources:

How I Conceptualize Cover Letters

As we discussed last week (and I imagine we will discuss further tonight), a big challenge with resumes concerns constructing a document that can beat a machine and at the same time engage a human. It is a balancing act.

At least that is one hurdle with which we don’t need to deal with cover letters. The challenge of the cover letter is to convey, in a few short paragraphs, the value (explicitly?) and energy (implicitly?) you will add to an organization. In addition to being a high stakes writing sample, it is also an elevator pitch, an introduction, a first date, a sales proposal, an intellectual and professional biography. A lot has to happen quickly.

I’ll offer the following outline for cover letters:

  • First paragraph. First sentence: position for which you are applying. “Thesis statement” as to why you are a good fit and/or interested in the position [pay attention to the specifics in your add, look for tests/prompts/possibilities].
  • Second paragraph. Storytime. Chances are your thesis involves something you can do. Tell a story about the time you did the thing. Are you applying for a marketing job? Tell a story about how you developed content for a social media channel. Applying for a grant writing position? Tell a story about the time your under/graduate class partnered with a local non-profit and you researched/developed stuff and/or liaised with folks to do things. Ideally, your story should have a what I did–what effect that had narrative structure, but it doesn’t have to. The point here is to take one thing you discuss in the resume, the best thing, and turn it into a paragraph of meaningful prose.
  • Third paragraph. Do you have a second awesome story? Cool. Tell that too! If not, then think about how you can translate your academic success and abilities into language that shows you are a strong fit for the position. If the ad stresses personality, then can you use something like the psychometric test to sell yourself? Is there something that the ad indicates as a requirement that you can indicate you are familiar with (or something similar, that given your familiarity with Adobe Photoshop and Premiere, you are confident that you will be able to learn InDesign quickly and/or given your interest in expanding into digital marketing, you are currently enrolled in a HubSpot social media marketing certification course?)
  • Concluding paragraph. Open with a reiteration of your interest in the position. Close with the standard stuff–you look forward to an interview to further discuss your qualifications / the position (is it about them? Or about you?)

What does a story look like? Here’s one from Hannah Hehn:

In the past semester I earned the title Creative Director of The Crucible Literary Magazine. In this post I’ve overseen the production of our Fall 2021 issue, working with the editors, editor-in-chief, and social media directors on the content, layout, themes, and promotional materials for the edition. This semester we worked with a document design class here to design the cover and internal visuals as part of a contest. This entailed consulting with the design class as well as The Crucible’s President and Vice President extensively to make final decisions. Working individually played a large role as well, both in creating a possible internal design for the edition, and in editing the final products for printing within our tight deadlines.

And here’s one by Carl McDonald:

During my education, I took part in a team tasked with assisting a local nonprofit, Santa Cops of Weld County, to find and apply for grants. This project included locating grants through various grant databases, including the CRC America and the Foundation Directory Online, familiarizing ourselves with the grant application process, and writing the proposal itself. I focused my efforts on a Build-A-Bear Charitable Giving grant, which procured 120 stuffed bears for at-risk kids the following Christmas.

I also assisted Impact Locally, a nonprofit in Denver, in the same capacity as an intern this summer. I worked remotely, giving weekly updates about my research and progress. At the end of my internship, we were selected by Colorado Blueprint to End Hunger for a substantial grant to continue food distribution to the homeless through the Covid19 crisis.

Building a Linkedin Profile

Let’s just say that this video by Professor Heather Austin provides perspective.

  • Basics: Get a Headshot
  • Slogan: Max of 300 words
  • About: Split into Summary (Who you are, who you help, how you help them) and the Expertise (block of resume-style skills). Keep paragraphs short.
  • Skills: Pick the “big” three. Then a handful more.
  • Experience: Be descriptive

Resources:

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ENG 301 15.T: Cover Letters

Today’s Plan:

Rest of Year Schedule

  • Today: Cover Letters
  • Thursday: Review Resume Drafts in Class [Please submit your resume by Wednesday at midnight]. Here is a link to the class notes on resumes.
  • Tuesday, April 26th, Cover letter drafts
  • Thursday, April 28th, Linkedin workshop

ABO Book

Let’s start off with some basic advice. Writer’s checklist. Focused paragraphs.

But let’s talk follow-up (FlexJobs). But first, a scene.

A few other resources:

How I Conceptualize Cover Letters

As we discussed last week (and I imagine we will discuss further tonight), a big challenge with resumes concerns constructing a document that can beat a machine and at the same time engage a human. It is a balancing act.

At least that is one hurdle with which we don’t need to deal with cover letters. The challenge of the cover letter is to convey, in a few short paragraphs, the value (explicitly?) and energy (implicitly?) you will add to an organization. In addition to being a high stakes writing sample, it is also an elevator pitch, an introduction, a first date, a sales proposal, an intellectual and professional biography. A lot has to happen quickly.

I’ll offer the following outline for cover letters:

  • First paragraph. First sentence: position for which you are applying. “Thesis statement” as to why you are a good fit and/or interested in the position [pay attention to the specifics in your add, look for tests/prompts/possibilities].
  • Second paragraph. Storytime. Chances are your thesis involves something you can do. Tell a story about the time you did the thing. Are you applying for a marketing job? Tell a story about how you developed content for a social media channel. Applying for a grant writing position? Tell a story about the time your under/graduate class partnered with a local non-profit and you researched/developed stuff and/or liaised with folks to do things. Ideally, your story should have a what I did–what effect that had narrative structure, but it doesn’t have to. The point here is to take one thing you discuss in the resume, the best thing, and turn it into a paragraph of meaningful prose.
  • Third paragraph. Do you have a second awesome story? Cool. Tell that too! If not, then think about how you can translate your academic success and abilities into language that shows you are a strong fit for the position. If the ad stresses personality, then can you use something like the psychometric test to sell yourself? Is there something that the ad indicates as a requirement that you can indicate you are familiar with (or something similar, that given your familiarity with Adobe Photoshop and Premiere, you are confident that you will be able to learn InDesign quickly and/or given your interest in expanding into digital marketing, you are currently enrolled in a HubSpot social media marketing certification course?)
  • Concluding paragraph. Open with a reiteration of your interest in the position. Close with the standard stuff–you look forward to an interview to further discuss your qualifications / the position (is it about them? Or about you?)

What does a story look like? Here’s one from Hannah Hehn:

In the past semester I earned the title Creative Director of The Crucible Literary Magazine. In this post I’ve overseen the production of our Fall 2021 issue, working with the editors, editor-in-chief, and social media directors on the content, layout, themes, and promotional materials for the edition. This semester we worked with a document design class here to design the cover and internal visuals as part of a contest. This entailed consulting with the design class as well as The Crucible’s President and Vice President extensively to make final decisions. Working individually played a large role as well, both in creating a possible internal design for the edition, and in editing the final products for printing within our tight deadlines.

And here’s one by Carl McDonald:

During my education, I took part in a team tasked with assisting a local nonprofit, Santa Cops of Weld County, to find and apply for grants. This project included locating grants through various grant databases, including the CRC America and the Foundation Directory Online, familiarizing ourselves with the grant application process, and writing the proposal itself. I focused my efforts on a Build-A-Bear Charitable Giving grant, which procured 120 stuffed bears for at-risk kids the following Christmas.

I also assisted Impact Locally, a nonprofit in Denver, in the same capacity as an intern this summer. I worked remotely, giving weekly updates about my research and progress. At the end of my internship, we were selected by Colorado Blueprint to End Hunger for a substantial grant to continue food distribution to the homeless through the Covid19 crisis.

Link to annotated sample letters.

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