ENG 640 Week 1: Modern Foundations / Postmodern Anticipations

AKA: What is Rhetoric and Why does Modern Philosophy Hate it So Much?
Today’s Plan:

  • Intro Activity
  • Discuss Kant, Readings, Herrick, and Ong (6:00-7:15)
  • Break (7:30-7:45)
  • Syllabus (7:45-8:20) and readings discussion
  • For Next Session: Lyotard (8:20 – fin)

Intro Activity

I have a question.

Review Readings

Sections of the Herrick Article:
Rhetoric and Persuasion (pg. 3-5). How does Herrick attempt to nudge our understanding of persuasion?
Rhetoric is Adapted to an Audience (pg. 8-10)
Rhetoric Reveals Human Motives and Rhetoric is Responsive (pg. 10-12)
Rhetoric Addresses Contingent Issues (pg. 15-16)
Rhetoric Tests Ideas (pg. 16-17)
Rhetoric Assists Advocacy (pg. 17-19)
Rhetoric Distributes Power (pg. 19-21)
Rhetoric Discovers Facts and Rhetoric Shapes Knowledge (pg. 21-22)
Rhetoric Builds Community (pg. 22-23)

I have a packet of supplemental materials to discuss the Readings chapters and the Kant.

I just published a thing about Ong.

Syllabus / Discuss Week 15 and Week 16 Readings

I have a link for this.

For Next Session:

There are three readings for next session:

  • Read Lyotard, PoMo Condition, pp. 37-67 (from section 10 Legitimation to Conclusion).
  • Read Bill Readings, University in Ruins, chapters 10, 11, and 12 (pp. 150-193).
  • Read Richard Lanham, “The Q Question.” (pp. 155-194).

There is a discussion forum post that focuses on the Lyotard and Readings in Canvas.

Let’s prep some Lyotard.

  • Jameson’s forward–the crisis of modern epistemology (based on objectivity of observation, sense of the senses), viii.
  • An institutional switch: from epistemology to performativity (drenched in capitalism & efficiency)
  • Lyotard’s opposition to consensus (echoes of Nietzsche), xviii-xix.
  • Cool line rejecting modern autonomy and individuality, p. 15. Language as the medium of our social bond.
  • Legitimation of Scientific Knowledge (is on shaky grounds), p. 25, 29
  • What I haven’t copied is that the Legitimation of Culture is on equally shaky grounds (e.g., Hegel’s spirit/progress as a historical certainty). In both systems some entity, agent, idea, exists transcendental to the system that ensures its certainty, legitimates the system, but that entity, agent, idea–by being transcendent–is beyond legitimation itself.

Lanham:
One of my favorite essays, but the first few pages are kind of a mess. Lanham’s distinction between weak and strong notions of rhetoric doesn’t really emerge until later in the essay. Pre-work:

  • Plato’s ontology and epistemology is very similar to Kant’s in that it projects a realm of though/truth that exists prior to human language and communication. Philosophers do not invent ideas, they discover them–gain access to them. Language, then, should ideally just be a neutral conveyor of information (which it never can be for reasons but it is too early to mess with Derrida and Kenneth Burke). At worst, Plato acknowledges that certified philosophers (certified only by Plato) might use rhetoric in order to convince the ignorant masses to not feed them hemlock. I hate Plato. He is a fascist. I do not mean this metaphorically. We do not have time to read his Republic.

I don’t think you need any more pre-work on the Bill Readings–by now it should be obvious that his book attempts to translate Lyotard into his experiences working in an English department in the late 1990s, after the “canon” wars and the rise of (pomo) theory and cultural studies. He’s also working in quite a bit of Levinas–and I will return back to him and highlight that when we read Levinas in week 4.

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ENG 231 1.M: Welcome, WTF is (Procedural) Rhetoric?

Today’s Plan:

  • Syllabus
  • WTF is Rhetoric?
  • Ian Bogost and Procedurality
  • Homework

WTF is(n’t) Rhetoric?

Very soon I will ask you to conduct a rhetorical analysis of a video game. Which means you need some sense of what it means to be rhetorical. Over the next 5 minutes I will do my best to complicate that word, stretching rhetoric from what you might think it means to what I have convinced myself it should mean. Here we go.

First, let me get this out of the way. If you are familiar with the term rhetoric, then you probably think it means “persuasion.” That’s its most common academic definition. We have Aristotle to thank for that. But Aristotle is a philosopher. He wants rhetoric to mean persuasion so that rhetoric is reduced to communicating truth. Philosophy find truth, rhetoric figures out how to communicate to people. I do not think that rhetoric is merely about how to communicate things. I reject the definition of rhetoric as “persuasion.”

If you heard the word “rhetoric” in most contexts, then you would think someone is being manipulative. They are being evil. Or they are spouting bullshit. This is in part a legacy of Aristotle and–more importantly–his teacher Plato. Obviously I have not dedicated my academic career to learning bullshit.

Okay, so that basically covers what I don’t think rhetoric is. I am not going to directly tell you (yet) what I think rhetoric is. Moving on.

I would argue that rhetoric is the foundation of what we call the humanities (classically, the humanities emerge from two rhetorical scholars in Rome–Cicero and Quintillian; they are radically transformed by Petrarch, moving from a civic education to a personal/aesthetic one).

ENG 231 counts as your LAC 1 Arts and Humanities credit. While I have bunch of titles and credentials: professional writer, UX specialist, curriculum expert, I tend to self-identify as a rhetorical theorist and a post-humanist. My areas of expertise include asymmetrical ethics (ethics of hospitality) and digital technology. In fact, as I just wrote about, the former help us recognize the importance of the latter.

Rather than attempt to define rhetoric or humanities or asymmetrical ethics I will just read a bunch of quotes I like:

Emmanuel Levinas:
“Ontology [philosophy’s investment in truth, definition, categorization], which reduces the other to the same, promotes freedom–the freedom that is the identification of the same, not allowing itself to be alienated by the other.”

“We name this calling into question of my spontaneity [freedom] by the presence of the Other ethics. The strangeness of the Other, his irreducibility to the I, to my thoughts and possessions, is precisely accomplished as a calling into question of my spontaneity, as ethics.”
(Totality and Infinity 42-43; “freedom” in direct conflict with “responsibility/obligation”)

Diane Davis:
“An ethics of decision in a world that has lost its criteria for responsible action begins with straining to hear the excess that gets drowned out, sacrificied for the clarity of One voice, One call, One legitimate position.”
(Breaking Up at Totality 19)

Michael J. Hyde:
“Rhetoric facilitates acknowledgement by transforming space and time into dwelling places where people can feel at home with each other, engage in collaborative deliberation, and know together ways of resolving disputed concerns. […] The rhetor is an architect, a builder of dwelling places, homes, habitats, where the caress of others is a welcoming occurrence.”

Adriana Cavarero:
Thinking and speaking are different activities. Thinking wants to be timeless […] furthermore, it is always solitary, even when it takes place between several people […] As Maria Zambrano notes, too, “logos proceeds without any other opposition than what it, in order to better show itself, poses to itself.”

Speaking, on the contrary […] does not know in advance where it is going, and it entrusts itself to the unpredictable nature of what the interlocutors say. In short, thought is as solitary as speech is relational.

Victor Vitanza:
My position is, especially in the next chapter, that we are not at home in our world/whirl of language. Any and every attempt to assume that we are has or will have created for human beings dangerous situations. (Negation, Subjectivity, and the History of Rhetoric, 157

Now it is crucial to understand that, for Heidegger, all that “we speak” by way of logos/language, or “speaking/saying” is perpetually an act of concealing/unconcealing. For Heidegger, this Being/essence cannot be realized, completely revealed or unconcealed. Any and every attempt to unconceal or answer definitively is to perpetrate an act of violence on Being and on human being. (NSHoR, 177)

Thomas Rickert:
Dwelling places us in the insight that rhetoric, being worldly, cannot be understood solely as human doing and that persuasion gains its bearings from an affectability that emerges with our material environments both prior to and alongside the human…

Julia Kristeva:
To worry or to smile, such is the choice when we are assailed by the strange; our decision depends on how familiar we are with our own ghosts. (Strangers to Ourselves)

Taken collectively, these quotes express why I value a particular kind of (postmodern) rhetoric and what I see as the mission, the importance, of the humanities. Both teach us how to productively orient ourselves towards others. How to be in a world without certainty. How to temper our desire to force others to match up with our categories, ideas, desires, and comforts. How to handle the disorienting feelings that another person can engender within us. Levinas wrote that, by our nature, we are allergic to difference. The humanities offer medication that can help remedy the symptoms. I believe some video games are learning how to maximize their potential for teaching us how to better experience alterity, deal with ambiguity, and reflect upon the “selfishness” of our own commitments, ideas, and values. This is a class about those games.

Okay, there’s your “out there” theoretical foundations of the course. How about something more grounded. Let’s swing back to the idea of a rhetorical analysis. Maybe you have had to write a rhetorical analysis before, in high school or in ENG 122 here at UNC. Let me riff a bit on how one might typically approach the rhetorical analysis of a video game.

  • Text: What is the *purpose* of this text? What statement does it *intend* to make about our world, society, human condition, struggles? [Logos, meaning, argument]
  • Player: How do you relate to the game’s intended purpose? Does it resonate with you? [questions of pathos and feeling]
  • Writer/Designer/Programmer: Who are they trying to be? What voice/style do they assume? How do they position themselves in relation to genre/audience? Are they shouting or intending to be invisible? [Questions of Ethos]

So, the standard stuff–logos, ethos, and pathos. When we analyze a narrative, whether it is a book, a television show, a movie, a podcast, we ask ourselves variations of these questions.

Video games, however, are interactive in a way these other mediums are not. They at least afford us an image of agency, as if what we do matters to the world we traverse and the story we experience (this is a vibrant field of video game scholarship–determining to what extent our choices in games actually matter, and veterans of 225 will hear some Sicart stuff circulating here).

The interactive nature of video games, that fact that we “act” instead of merely “witness,” means we need to add a new, more complicated dimension to our rhetorical analysis: one that analyzes the actions a game forces us to take, and the rules that compute, score, or resolve that action. Philosopher Ian Bogost has termed the such action and computation as the game’s “procedurality.”

Ian Bogost and Procedurality

The first way we will analyze games this semester stems from Ian Bogost’s theory of procedural rhetoric. Bogost seeks to add procedural rhetoric to its other dominant traditions–oral/written rhetoric and visual rhetoric (which has gained increasing importance in the late 20th and early 21st centuries). Given the messy diatribe that preceded this paragraph, let’s just say that Bogost tends to define rhetoric as “influence,” close to persuasion, but recognizing non-rational and non-conscious dimensions to rhetoric. That is, we are being “persuaded” at almost every point in our lives by forces explicit and implicit (for instance, the ways that desks are arranged in rows are “persuading” you to accept my authority etc etc). Bogost believes video games are extraordinary good at this kind of passive, non-conscious persuasion. Let’s read some of his work.

Okay, let’s play something.

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Okay, one more game.

Homework

Your first assignment is due before Thursday’s class. Read Bogost’s 2017 article “The Rhetoric of Video Games” (.pdf in the files section of Canvas).

I’m curious to learn you perception of this article–do you understand what Bogost is talking about? Do you find this article difficult to follow?–and so I’m going to ask you to reflect on a few questions. You can write your answers directly in Canvas or submit them as a Google Doc / Word docx.

These responses are meant to prime you for Wednesday’s discussion. I’m hoping everyone comes to class Wednesday with something to contribute (so you don’t have to be super happy with every response below, but you should be ready to share two of them).

  • Question #1: Find me the line where Bogost defines procedural rhetoric. Try putting it in your own words.
  • Question #2: Is there a term/part of this article you don’t understand or want me to address in detail? And/or is there a part of this article with which you disagree?
  • Question #3: What do you make of Bogost’s analysis of Take Back Illinois and Bully?
  • Question #4: Can you think of a time when a game did something interesting procedurally? What game? What did it do? Or can you think of a game in which the procedures and mechanics lack any kind of meaningful relationship to the argument/purpose/theme?

Syllabus

We will look at this.

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ENG 328 1.M: The Basic C.R.A.P.

Today’s Plan:

  • Welcome
  • Visual Rhetoric and Design
  • The Basic C.R.A.P.
  • Homework

Welcome

I’ve got a quick Google Form for you to complete.

A Quick Intro: Why Learn Design?

First, a little bit about me. My undergraduate degree is in British Literature, and my MA focused on 18th Century British Literature. I wasn’t a big fan of computers until I got into PhD program, way back in 2003. I had to mess around with Photoshop a bit teaching a first-year writing course (IIRC, the project required students to write liner notes and design a cover for a favorite CD). I got hooked on technology, and learned HTML, CSS, and some Java back when English majors could get jobs designing websites. I taught web design and writing at my first job. But by around 2012, I noticed things had changed. Web design and coding jobs required more sophisticated, back-end skills those jobs weren’t going to English majors anymore. And front-end CMS sites, like Squarespace and WordPress, were taking over the web writing world.

But, because learning to develop web sites had taught me the fundamentals of visual rhetoric and design, I was able to transition my skills into other media–particularly videography (I teach ENG 229) and print design and production. That’s what this course is about.

As I indicate in the syllabus, I see this course as serving a multitude of different purposes; I hope the course is flexible enough that the exact learning outcomes conform to your trajectory. All student should benefit from learning how to design more coherent and striking presentations–from something as seemingly simple as selecting a template, to pairing image and text, to maximizing contrast, and improving readability. I’m going to get this out of the way right now: don’t ever fucking center-align text. A title? Maybe if you are lazy and uninspired. Text that you actually want me to read? Nope.

Those skills should translate into developing flyers and handouts (both for academic contexts and professional ones). Those looking to pursue a career in publishing benefit not only from knowing how to use InDesign as a technical tool, but also from understanding how the “flow” process influences textual formatting and use of styles (in, say, Microsoft Word–how do you prep a Word document for publication?). And, as I emphasize in 229, knowing how to take and edit a photograph always has value–both professionally and personally.

The first 8 weeks of this course will emphasize the professional and technical elements of the course, as we learn key design concepts and softwares (primarily Canva and InDesign). The second half of the course is constructed around 3 community engagement projects. Let’s take a look at the syllabus.

The Basic C.R.A.P.

The first design book I ever read was Robin Williams’ The Non-Designer’s Design Book. I assign Golumbiski and Hagen’s White Space book because I believe they are more comprehensive, and because I appreciate their work on color. But William’s opening lessons on the basic CRAP of design are immediately accessible and actionable. And so, I begin with them today. I’ve emailed out a .pdf.

If we have time, then I’d like to try something.

Homework

There is an assignment in Canvas called “Reading and Effective Design” due before Wednesday’s class. It requires you do some reading and then analyze a cool design of your choice.

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ENG 301 15.R: Cover Letters

Today’s Plan:

  • Next Week’s Class
  • Peer Review Resumes
  • Drafting Cover Letters
  • Optional: Building a Linkedin Profile

Cover Letters

Let’s start off with some basic advice. Writer’s checklist. Focused paragraphs.

But let’s talk follow-up (FlexJobs). But first, a scene.

A few other resources:

How I Conceptualize Cover Letters

As we discussed last week (and I imagine we will discuss further tonight), a big challenge with resumes concerns constructing a document that can beat a machine and at the same time engage a human. It is a balancing act.

At least that is one hurdle with which we don’t need to deal with cover letters. The challenge of the cover letter is to convey, in a few short paragraphs, the value (explicitly?) and energy (implicitly?) you will add to an organization. In addition to being a high stakes writing sample, it is also an elevator pitch, an introduction, a first date, a sales proposal, an intellectual and professional biography. A lot has to happen quickly.

I’ll offer the following outline for cover letters:

  • First paragraph. First sentence: position for which you are applying. “Thesis statement” as to why you are a good fit and/or interested in the position [pay attention to the specifics in your add, look for tests/prompts/possibilities].
  • Second paragraph. Storytime. Chances are your thesis involves something you can do. Tell a story about the time you did the thing. Are you applying for a marketing job? Tell a story about how you developed content for a social media channel. Applying for a grant writing position? Tell a story about the time your under/graduate class partnered with a local non-profit and you researched/developed stuff and/or liaised with folks to do things. Ideally, your story should have a what I did–what effect that had narrative structure, but it doesn’t have to. The point here is to take one thing you discuss in the resume, the best thing, and turn it into a paragraph of meaningful prose.
  • Third paragraph. Do you have a second awesome story? Cool. Tell that too! If not, then think about how you can translate your academic success and abilities into language that shows you are a strong fit for the position. If the ad stresses personality, then can you use something like the psychometric test to sell yourself? Is there something that the ad indicates as a requirement that you can indicate you are familiar with (or something similar, that given your familiarity with Adobe Photoshop and Premiere, you are confident that you will be able to learn InDesign quickly and/or given your interest in expanding into digital marketing, you are currently enrolled in a HubSpot social media marketing certification course?)
  • Concluding paragraph. Open with a reiteration of your interest in the position. Close with the standard stuff–you look forward to an interview to further discuss your qualifications / the position (is it about them? Or about you?)

What does a story look like? Here’s one from Hannah Hehn:

In the past semester I earned the title Creative Director of The Crucible Literary Magazine. In this post I’ve overseen the production of our Fall 2021 issue, working with the editors, editor-in-chief, and social media directors on the content, layout, themes, and promotional materials for the edition. This semester we worked with a document design class here to design the cover and internal visuals as part of a contest. This entailed consulting with the design class as well as The Crucible’s President and Vice President extensively to make final decisions. Working individually played a large role as well, both in creating a possible internal design for the edition, and in editing the final products for printing within our tight deadlines.

And here’s one by Carl McDonald:

During my education, I took part in a team tasked with assisting a local nonprofit, Santa Cops of Weld County, to find and apply for grants. This project included locating grants through various grant databases, including the CRC America and the Foundation Directory Online, familiarizing ourselves with the grant application process, and writing the proposal itself. I focused my efforts on a Build-A-Bear Charitable Giving grant, which procured 120 stuffed bears for at-risk kids the following Christmas.

I also assisted Impact Locally, a nonprofit in Denver, in the same capacity as an intern this summer. I worked remotely, giving weekly updates about my research and progress. At the end of my internship, we were selected by Colorado Blueprint to End Hunger for a substantial grant to continue food distribution to the homeless through the Covid19 crisis.

Building a Linkedin Profile

Let’s just say that this video by Professor Heather Austin provides perspective.

  • Basics: Get a Headshot
  • Slogan: Max of 300 words
  • About: Split into Summary (Who you are, who you help, how you help them) and the Expertise (block of resume-style skills). Keep paragraphs short.
  • Skills: Pick the “big” three. Then a handful more.
  • Experience: Be descriptive

Resources:

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ENG 301 13.R: Resumes

Rhetorically Constructing Resumes

When I teach resumes at the undergraduate level, I emphasize the importance of an rhetorical approach. Rhetoric here means two things to me:

  • First, it means that I attempt to read what the other person wants, thinks, values, and prioritizes
  • Second, it means that I approach the situation without an expectation of control or mastery, that I understand that the situation calls for a calculation of risk

I contrast this rhetorical approach to the more “philosophical” approach that tends to drive the advice one would get from career services or from many resume books and websites. Philosophical approaches try to teach hard and fast rules for developing materials. Do this! Don’t do that! They are often more concerned with their own preferences; and thus overwrite the wide chaos one finds in ads with a more simple and controlled framework. They also tend to be more conservative when it comes to voice, tone, and content. I am skeptical of this kind of “cookie cutter” approach.

Rather, I think you should approach your job materials less in terms of a baking recipe and more in terms of a high stakes poker game. When you play poker, the cards you hold are important. But equally important is your ability to read your opponents, and to make sure that you adjust your play based on theirs. You cannot plan out a poker strategy before you play the game–you can have ideas, certainly–but those ideas have to be re-calibrated once the game starts and you begin familiarizing yourself with the players.

In terms of a job search and the construction your materials, it is useful to have drafted in advance material for a resume and a cover letter. But the resume and cover letter you send to a potential employer should always be transformed based on the position for which you apply. And these transformations shouldn’t be merely cosmetic–you should create content that you think speaks to that particular organizations needs. I’ve been on the job market twice in the past 15 years, and both times I started with a default letter and CV. This doesn’t mean I recommend writing a completely different letter for every job. I don’t, no one has time for that. [job letters-unc (teaching new media and tech writing), msu (digital rhetoric research), tamu (classical)]. But I do recommend spending time reading an ad carefully, thinking about how you arrange material, and making sure that the language you use in a letter matches up with the language you find not only on an ad, but also on an organization’s website (mission statement, about us, projects). Your resume and cover letter should show organizations how you can use research and rhetoric to craft more compelling prose.

Rhetoric is the art of adapting a message to a particular audience, of recognizing the affordances and advantages of a particular situation. It always involves elements of risk and chance. I believe job searches are particularly arbitrary–there is no system or pattern to what employers look for because every employer, every human resource director, is different, and brings to the process her own preferences, methods, and attitudes. The best we can do is to learn to analyze, listen, and think through possibilities–to be aware of the potential choices we have and to make precise calculations for every position to which we apply. While we can’t be certain, we can do our best to know our audience(s), and to tailor ourselves to their preferences.

Some Practical Advice that May Even Be Useful, in Some Situations, Some of the Time

Okay, with those rhetorical reservations in place, let me tentatively offer some advice. First, we need to make sure we are designing resumes that are ATS (applicant tracking system) compliant. This is probably the biggest change I have had to deal with in the 12 or so years that I have taught resumes–the increasing difficulty and prioritization of designing a document that 1) can “beat” the machine and 2) is still persuasive, compelling, and/or readable to a human being. The advice 10 years ago focused on the importance of keywords (previous link). So does the advice today . I think our Project 1 Coding Sheet is a great generic resource for identifying keywords–but be sure to code any advertisement to which you plan on applying to see if you can identify idiosyncratic language. Also, preparing resumes for ATS has implications for style and design. (Note: see tool at the bottom, see Common mistakes, short video)

So let’s assume that we’ve beaten the machine. Now our resume is in the hands (or more likely on the screen) of a human resource director or a manager who needs to wean a stack of 20-25 candidates down to a stack of 5 for interviews. Now we might have to beat the dreaded six second scan.. But beware keyword stuffing!

Let’s close this section with a review of some generic but staple resume advice–a few Squawkfox articles.

Resumes Part 2

New for 2022, Plain Text Resume

Sample Resumes.

Wright, Dol, and Collins (2011). See sample resume description [could this go in a resume or a cover letter? Top of the resume for a person? Or bottom of a resume? Where to position this?]. See Wonderlic.

Another resource to help identify strengths/compatibility: Big Five personality test.

Here is my heuristic/template for starting a resume

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ENG 225: Mapping Out the Rest of Our Year

Today’s Plan:

  • Mapping Out the Rest of Our Year
  • Characters and Action Sentence Syntax
  • Reviewing Introductions
  • Submitting Your Draft
  • Additional Office Hours Wednesday, All Day Next Monday
  • 2 Points on Your Final Grade for Visiting the Writing Center!
  • Final Presentations

Mapping Out the Rest of Our Year

Here’s what we have left:

  • Nov 15th: Sentence Syntax / Introductions
  • Nov 17th: Ross Computer Lab / APA Formatting
  • Nov 23rd: Drafts of Final Papers Due in Canvas [Can be submitted earlier]
  • Nov 29th: Revising Prose / Revising Checklist
  • Dec 1st: Final Presentations
  • Final Papers are due December 9th

Today in Class

I have a syntax exercise and some introductions for us to review.

Let’s talk about thesis paragraphs.

Office Hours

I will have additional office hours in my regular office, Ross 1140B, on Wednesday from 1:00 to 3:30. As always, I will be in the library main foyer (by the coffee stand) on Friday from 1:00 to 3:30. And I will be in my office all day on Monday, Novemeber 22nd. Shoot me an email for a Monday appointment.

Lightning Talks

Resources:

  • Sign Up
  • Template [make a copy, submit link to Canvas]

For our final two class sessions, you will give 5-8 minute lightning talks on your final paper. If you are uncomfortable giving a “talk,” then you are welcome (and encouraged) to read a paper–a five minute talk is about 400 words. You also have the option of recording a powerpoint or recording a video–we can watch those in class.

I’ve created a barebones Google Slide template for your presentations. Feel free to add slides, change font/layout/colors, etc. Also, screen shots are awesome in a presentation (remember that Powerpoint is Evil)–you want your slides to contain concise points that you explain to us. Don’t put *too* much writing on a slide–you want the slides to highlight the main points of your talk.

My general expectation is that you will revise your longer paper down to about 3-4 pages double-spaced and have that somewhat memorized. So, again, reading a paper that is accompanied by a presentation is fine.

Sign ups.

APA Formatting Checklist

Let’s walk through some key points from your drafts.

Homework

For Thursday’s class, please have a draft of your paper including a reference / works cited page. We will be working on APA formatting in the Ross 1240 lab.

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ENG 123 14.M: Mapping Out the Rest of the Year

Today’s Plan:

  • Mapping Out the Rest of the Year
  • Labor-Based Grading and Final Extra Labor Opportunities
  • Williams and Bizup

Mapping Out the Rest of the Year

We are really in the home stretch now. Here’s the rest of the year:

  • Wednesday in Ross computer lab: One Last APA review
  • Friday: Research Presentation Sign Ups and Expectations
  • Next Tuesday at midnight: Final Draft due via Canvas
  • Week after the break: Research Presentations
  • Revised papers will be due Wednesday December 7th at midnight

Labor-Based Grading and Extra Labor Opportunity

Before Wednesday’s class I will email everyone with their current final grade. Remember that the number in Canvas doesn’t automatically include your extra-labor points. If you are looking to earn a few points between now and the end of the year, then I highly encourage you to schedule an appointment this week with the writing center. They can work with you on discussing your data, developing your lit review, revising your methodology, or front-loading your introduction. If you schedule a Writing Center visit this week, I will award you 2 points on your final grade. DO IT!

Research Presentations

I’ll talk more about these on Friday. I wanted to alert you that, when we get back from break, we’ll spend that week sharing the results of your research. Everyone will be expected to give a 5-6 minute presentation. I’ll supply a Google Slides template for the presentation Friday and we will sign up for presentation slots.

I’m expecting 20-21 people to present, so we need 6-7 people to sign up for each day. If history serves illustrative, then I realize I will need to incentivize people to present on Monday. So I will award 1 point on the final grade for anyone who signs up for Monday.

Williams and Bizup

I wanted to spend one more day talking about sentence syntax, especially as you are (hopefully) in the throws of writing your papers.

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ENG 225 10.T: Final Project Proposals

Today’s Plan:

  • Final Project Proposals
  • Homework

Final Research Project Proposals

You will need to make a copy of this document.

Homework

Make a copy of the proposal document above. Put together your research list as I talked about in class (proposal section on Preliminary Research).

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ENG 225 9.T/R: Methodology and Data Assignment

Today’s Plan:

  • Checking in on Data (Did everyone do the thing?)
  • Methodology and Data Assignment
  • Writing a Methodology Section
  • Writing about Data/Findings

Methodology and Data Assignment

This week we are going to finish up project 2. As I indicated at the start of the project, we aren’t writing a complete research paper here. A complete paper looks like this:

  • Introduction [introduces need for study, states the problem, supplies hypothesis, DICTATES FINDINGS AND RECOMMENDATIONS]
  • Literature Review (previous research)
  • Methodology
  • Data / Findings
  • Discussion / Recommendations
  • Conclusion [reviews findings, directs future research]

We are going to spend this week focusing on methodology and findings.

Writing a Methodology Section

Think of writing a methodology section as if you were writing a recipe for baking a cake. I specifically say baking and not, say, grilling, because baking involves chemistry. You can grill steaks that have been “seasoned with salt and pepper.” You don’t necessarily need exact measurements. Try baking a cake without exact measurements and tell me how that goes. So the first and most important lesson when it comes to writing up a methodology section is to be detailed and precise. A researcher should be able to read this section and recreate your data pool and your analysis, and expect to get similar results.

Generally, any methodology section has three primary concerns:

  • Collection: How did you collect/identify the stuff that you would analyze? How/did you make sure your sample was either random or focused? In our case, how did you put together the collection of games your team analyzed?
  • Analysis: How did you analyze them? What did you look for? How did you know to look for that? Who else has looked for that? How does your methods compare?
  • Reliability: What did you do to make sure your results were accurate? Did more than one person analyze each item? Did you hold norming sessions to ensure everyone is on the same page?

Let’s look at a sample methodology for a project that, apparently, I will never finish writing.

Let’s look at another methodology description from an article that I finished writing this weekend.

Notice how I mention specific technologies and processes. I’m doing my best to walk my reader through what I did step-by-step.

Working with Data

To be honest, data sections can feel a bit boring. In these sections you want to tell the reader, as clearly as possible, what you found. It is very common to use bulleted lists, charts, and/or graphs in these sections. We will make some simple graphs in class on Thursday.

Even if you insert a graph or a chart into a data section, you still need to write a descriptive paragraph that puts the findings into words. Different readers will look for different things–some like visuals and are comfortable with them, while others will skip the visual and look for a textual description. I tend to read and review both. So your data section needs to be ready to accommodate a range of readers.

Let’s look at a sample data section from a student report.

Generally, when I review data sections I am looking for two things:

  • Visualization: Does the section contain a table or graph of data?
    Can you understand the table or graph, or is there some mystery meat?
  • Textual Description: Does the writer make clear what the table or graph says?

It isn’t enough to just have some graphs. You also need to provide a clear and concise textual description of your graphs too.

Creating Graphs in Google Sheets

Today we are going to work on creating graphs in Google Sheets. I’ve put together a set of sample data with which we can work; the data is from my ENG 301 Writing as a Job class.

Visualizing Our Data: Let’s Make Some Graphs

Today we are going to work with the data we produced in the last class to generate, label, and modify some graphs in Google Sheets. Learning outcomes:

  • Inputting Data to the Template
  • Generating a Graph
  • Editing the Graph’s Axis/Labels/Title
  • Modifying the Graph’s Appearance
  • Inserting the Graph in a Google Doc

Inputting Data to the Template
Now you have to decide on which jobs your report will focus. You could write your report about all of the jobs. You could focus on Writing and Editing jobs. You could focus on Social Media and Marketing Jobs. Or Social Media, Marketing, and Design. Etc. Etc. My only requirement is that you report on more than one column of jobs.

In order to make it easier to generate graphs in Google Sheets, you are going to make a copy of this template and populate it with numbers. This will require you to do a bit more math.

Unless significant (something you want to highlight in your discussion), delete any columns that contain a zero or a really low number.

Generating a Graph
Here is a link to Google’s documentation on creating a graph in Google Sheets. Insert > Chart. Easy Peasie.

Editing the Graph’s Axis/Labels/Title
This is also covered in the documentation. Let’s change the title first to Figure 1. Tools and Technologies

Editing the Graph’s Appearance
Fonts
Label angle?
Neat trick: series > data labels

Inserting a Graph in a Google Doc

Two ways:

  • Right corner of graph: Three dots. Copy. Then paste in your document [benefit: graph is linked, if you change the spreadsheet, it will auto-update the graph]
  • Convert the graph into an image [benefit: easier to email to technophobes]

Describing Visual Data

Scroll down to the ways to describe visual data. .

Homework

Remember that your homework for this weekend is to write both a methodology and data section. We will begin our final project on Tuesday.

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ENG 123 9.M: What is a Content Analysis?

Today’s Plan:

  • Setting Up a Content Analysis
  • Homework

Setting Up a Content Analysis

Several people proposed doing a content analysis as their form of primary research. Today I want to go over how to set one up. We’ll look at a few examples from other classes and from my own research.

What is a content analysis? It is a form of qualitative research whereby we analyze texts based on a pre-determined coding scheme or set method. The worknets we used earlier in the semester involved two different methods–first, the word cloud generator (which simply counts and visuals the occurance of words) and, second, the bibliographic analysis, which “maps” out and weighs the sources found in a text. The former gives us rough insight into the central ideas in a text, the other leads us to find connections to other texts.

When it comes to doing a content analysis, there’s three primary questions a researcher has to address:

  • Collection:How did you collect/identify the texts that you would analyze? How did you make sure your sample was either random or focused?
  • Analysis:How did you analyze them? What did you look for? How did you know to look for that? Who else has looked for that? How does your methods compare?
  • Reliability:What did you do to make sure your results were accurate?

Let me start with the third, reliability. This usually requires what researchers call “triangulation,” which means you use multiple methods (preferably 3) to make sure that your data is sound. For content analysis, this ideally means that you have 2 or 3 people looking at the same texts to see if they are seeing the same things.

Investigating Female Protagonists in Popular Video Games

This is a student project from my ENG 225 Rhetoric and Gaming class.

  • Collection: We used Steam to identify a list of 150 games with a female protagonist. We then used Google to find full body images of those characters. We took screenshots of those characters and put them into a Google Slide show.
  • Analysis: We drew upon Anita Sarkeesian’s “Tropes Vs. Women” Feminist Frequency series to develop a set of questions to apply to every image. Working from her videos “Strategic Butt Coverings,” “Body Language and the Male Gaze,” and “Lingerie is not Armor,” and from the Hawkeye Initiative (which influences the later two questions), we developed the following four questions:
    • Is this character sexualized?
    • Is this character wearing clothing suitable to their task?
    • Would it be strange to see a man wearing a similar outfit?
    • Would it be strange to see a man in a similar pose?
  • Reliability: Every image was scored by two students. Non-contiguous scores were discussed by the group.

Analyzing Job Advertisements for Professional Writers

Investigating Bias and Reliability in News Media Coverage of George Floyd’s Murder

Since I just wrote about this one, let’s take a look.

If you are putting together a list of news sources, then I advise using the Ad Fontes Media Chart as part of your process.

If we have time left, let’s think about how we might develop a content analysis project for either gun policy, climate change, or mushrooms. Let’s start with climate.

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